Suggestions for Kaywire.

Okay, so first of all, let me start off with this: for a site that has just recently started, this place is going great. But, it also has several flaws that I think we could work on.

First of all, the website seems very cluttered. The many tabs on the side of the main site like "YouTube", "Hotmail", and the stuff like that make it seem like you are trying to fit too much into one site. A clean, organized site is the key to getting visitors.

You should just have the different game sections, like "Action", "Shooting", and others like that on the side, and that's all (besides the forum link). This will make your page seem much more professional. Second of all, no offense to you Kaywire, but a good site requires perfect grammar everywhere. I realize that some people either just don't care, or aren't able to do that, but trust me, it can make or break a site.

And the last thing that caught my eye was the game selection. First of all, it would look much less cluttered if you were to make a list of links that would take you to each individual game, instead of having every single game already brought up on the screen. Something like www.freeworldgroup.com. I think it would be best if we were to have a section for games that Kaywire Productions have made themselves.

I know this seems like a lot, but I hope you take the time to read it. This place would be great, if only some simple changes were made. Thanks (: